All Comments on 'The Corruption of Colt Jackson Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story continues to worsen. Marc’s criminal lifestyle has made him a thug and he’s showing that side to Colt. He’s now laid his hands on him and physically injured him and set the path they will continue down. Colt needs to simply leave. His house, his stuff and just disappear. This is bad but it will get so much worse. Marc is not just corrupting Colt with alcohol or drugs, he’s not just controlling Colt with money, joblessness, moving in or harsh treatment. He is abusing Colt, inflicting pain, drawing blood, and evoking fear. Colt has seen this with his parents and has been a victim of his dad’s abuse. He should be smarter and stronger but he clearly is not. I no longer like this story. It’s always been ominous but it’s turned an irredeemable corner now.

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

Oh Colt, this should be a wake-up call but here he goes rationalizing it because Marc cleaned up after him after harming him. He's a victim of abuse so I guess I should be more understanding. I am but I want so much better for him. Marc is turning his house into a halfway house for god's sake and he had him washing bloody clothes, I can't.

We've been building up to Marc overtly abusing Colt but I was hoping other wise. Man I thought this was gonna be about Colt getting into some kinky shit with Marc but this is so much worse. And I need to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I have seen too many victims, justifying their abusers, making excuses, believing that it will get better. Hopefully this story will end better than my clients. I am so ambivalent about this story; do I like it or do i hate it? Here hoping for a turn toward happiness (naive me still hope for happy endings)

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I write psychological thriller erotica. Most of my stories get pretty dark and twisted along the way. I try to put things back together in the end, however.

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