All Comments on 'The Corruption of Mary'
by marriedpervs
- 19 Comments
digdaddyrichalmost 15 years agoA few misspelled words that through me a little trying to understand what it was supposed to say, but by in large a very good hot and sexy story. Maybe an editor would help a little on some of those words.Like I have already said, great story, I could only imagine what she felt like picking her kids up at school with her pussy and ass stretched out by the big black cock. Thanks for the good story.....Rich
JR68almost 15 years agoThis great story literally screams for a sequel...or two - just give us more!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoTo the guy below me are you mad? Did it hit close to home and that's why you get bent out of shape? You had to know what the story was about yet each and everyday closet cucks like you come into these stories to show that you have a pint of manhood. And the other guy was white btw.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoIt wasn't bad though it's a bit of an old formula You sure know how to get all the huffy jerks backs up doncha girl, they'll be screaming with indignant outrage!!! Myself, I love doing slutty hotwives while their bloated balding limp-dicked hubbies are slaving at work. And to the moron below, er, yes you got it, what a fantastic ending that would have made. Now finish yer milk and fuck off back to school.Mancelt
younghungblackalmost 15 years agoHot body and even hotter mind. Thanks from a 24 y.o. black guy. Blaine
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI have read some of your stories and you have a perverted mind.
I like that in a woman....
Anonymousover 14 years ago....go ahead and remove this one if you can't take criticism but though you write adequately this is not a loving wife story.Interracial? There is not enough character development to even believe she's a good wife gone bad.No development of how she came to be a thoughtless heartless piece of shit,just decided after a few months of sexual frustration(does no one on here know how to pleasure themselves?)-to risk family and everyone's health for the sake of an orgasm.So who cares about the bitch?How can this be erotic if you don't care?-Pistolpackinpete
Anonymousover 11 years agoI would have sucked and licked her tangy asshole before I sank my cock in there.
26thNCover 4 years agoThere are bad authors, really bad authors, and really bad ir authors. This is another really bad ir authors trying to hide in LW.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoHow many respectable married women fantasise about being a slut like this?
Anonymous6 months agoI like your style of writing. You often write about what women fantasize about, sex with black men and in this story 2 strange men. Then you also include anal sex, including that hole with so many nerves, the one women love to offer to their lovers for different and often additional pleasure while having their pussies stimulated or filled with cock also. I enjoy those stories that include the pretty lady eagerly taking the man's cum into her mouth, gladly swallowing, and sucking his cock to provide additional pleasure and clean it off.
Note: those stories that include black men having sex with white women are commonly classified as ;interracial'.
Hope you'll keep writing more.
954Hard7 days agoA wife in need. Her will power was no match for her lust. Great description of the sex.
