All Comments on 'The Cougar and the Anaconda Ch. 01'

The title says chapter 1 ...... I’m looking forward to the next chapters already ..... he need to return the favor and explore her ass

Love this story!!

Good beginning length, characters well developed. Except it belongs in Sci-Fi/Fantasy. Lawyers with personalities? With consciences? (just kidding) Yes, I've written about lawyers too, and this is a good one. Keep up the good work. I do hope there are more chapters to cum...

Great story and would love you to develop this further

I can never ride DART again without looking for you, wondering

Excellent stories as always!!!!!

Thank you all for your feedback on this story! I'm sorry my thanks is belated--I've been working on chapters 2-5, plus another cougar story that I have in the works. If you read those too, I truly hope you enjoy them. Thanks so much for reading my work! -Raven

Thank you for your story. Please keep writing and sharing your talent. BTW....I am very familiar with DFW...especially Dallas...hotel ZaZa...though I have never been on DART. And in the story...if "Jeremy" could fit in her mouth...he is definitely not an "anaconda"....I know. I am. But you did get it perfectly...if a woman has the opportunity to see...completely discreetly...IF...discreetly, and safely...nearly every woman, especially the happily married...just once...is eager...excited...to see a real life extreme endowment. AND...if the lady has an ex bf or husband who is himself extremely endowed...the chance to discreetly see and meet an even much bigger extreme endowment...is something that they dream of. Thank you again for your writing and sharing. Big Ben aka...and it is funny you titled your story what you did....I have many times been called several "names"...King Bull Elephant...but also...the life support system for the King Anaconda. Thank you again.

After that I must catch my breath and have the proverbial cigarette! Yeah, we actually used to do that. Must sound crappy to you youngsters but that first post coital smoke tasted almost as good as pussy! No you are right nothing is that good. OK, I'm starting to breath again!

First I have sampled of your wares, wont be the last! Adding you to my follow list so I don't miss any future posts while I catch up on your current offerings. I expected something good when your bio indicated "Texan". Must be something in the Lone Star water but you Texans sure know how to spin a yarn! Maybe it's the Shiner!

Keep spinnin' the tails, Raven, I'll be reading and dreaming.

Five big stars of course!

Until next time, Cheers!!

Sage

Hi OldSage, thank you for your compliments on my story. I hope you like the other chapters too. There are 5, and they each have at least 2 sex scenes, so I recommend you set aside at least 10 cigarettes. ;-)

It sounds like you want to read other things I've written. I'd like to recommend Gym Buddies with Benefits. It's more recent, so my writing is better than what I wrote back when I first joined Literotica in February, and it's got a fun surprise in the middle.

Thanks for supporting my writing,

Raven

Dear Ben, a/k/a "King Bull Elephant," thank you for the compliments on my story! Taking your suggestions to heart, in my next story, I will make my stud even bigger. Because...why not? ;-) Thanks again for supporting my work! -Raven

Raven...you are most welcome. Always my best to you. And thank you again for your sharing your talent and hard work.

I’d like to say it was a slow burn (six days before they actually fucked at the Gala) but the train scenes leading up to that were equally as hot. Suspending all belief that people would just go about their morning ride while an “anaconda” came in some woman’s hands is a bit of a stretch (pun intended) but of course that’s why we’re all here. I enjoyed the hotel scene and the butt play. I’m glad Jeremy is open-minded enough to allow himself to enjoy that. Also, BigBen find somewhere else besides the comment section to “stroke” your own ego.. it’s just weird

Dear Lexluthr, everyone needs a good hand job on a train now and then, and probably the other commuters recognized and respected that. (That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.) Anyway, thanks so much for the compliment and for reading my work. -Raven

So enjoyable, I’m rather inclined to pout all morning.... it’s not fair— fictitious lawyers have all the fun...

As others have said, deliciously fantastic in terms of the risks they take and get away with on the train and next to their spouses at dinner. And you capture the hunger, the searing energy so well!

So raw and fresh - what a torrid, lusty scene! Fantastic!

I lived the whole story through you and it was hot

I was sorry the story ended. Absolutely fabulous and hot as a summer day....Thank you!

I love stories from the female first person point of view. Please give us more.

Perfect. Thank you

whore poor gorge

If you truly ARE a female, you have taken the #1 spot if the hottest submissions I’ve ever read. And I’m up there in age. 🔥🔥🔥

Like the other men who made comments, I liked how you took him for sex even though he is half your age. Fingering his rectum was a reminder of what one woman did for me. I would have not cheated on my wife but would have given the older woman oral service as a prelude to couplation.

I skimmed this chapter. She is twice his age and thought about how he could have been his mother. With a daughter around his age, I can see how that is possible. You know by the comments, men who loved thinking about older women while the men were young, still imagine having that relationship. You trigger those feelings (and memories) when you write stories like this one.

Bruce