by Olddirtyman
It was ok. A lot of spelling errors and overuse of the work shudder, lol. You should really get someone to proofread your work before you publish. Not much of a story, but I liked it for what it was - stroke material. Not great but good.
Can't wait for the next part where the husbands catch up with these thoughtless little pricks and geld them!
*****Damn this series is HOT!!. Looking forward to next chapter. Great sex writing. Thanks for sharing.
I just want to say, welcome back! You're one of my favorites on here and it's good to see you writing again!
Please continue this story line. The dialog was very good. Some women really can become "dick whipped", and size queens...seeking extreme sIze...are the most vocal of all about being "king cock whipped"...
Will this story continue? I really like it and would love to read more about the adventures of Herbie, Wilma and Debra.