All Comments on 'The Cougar's Servant'

I think you could do by slowing down a bit on your writing. Everything is happening so fast, although the concept is cery sexy but the speed n rush to get there ruins the fun.

If you can do the same story with more details and prolonging the acts it will be more fun

I Just found this today and WOW! It is a shame there is not more... This read like the opening prologue to an on going story, that, or the opening of a "prequel" would have loved to read an in-depth series detailing the boys "capture" by this goddess and decent into loyal obedient play thing, love stories like this. Of obedience and not just domination, but this TYPE of domination. the seductive aspect.

would love to chat about things if you want to email me some time!