by wolfen_one
Those can be fixed easily. Love it so far. Very different from the usual non human stories here.
If I'm honest I haven't read the chapter, the comments have put me off. You can't depend on a programme to tell you if your spelling/grammar/punctuation is up to scratch and its very had to see the mistakes yourself. I suggest you ask for an editor via the volunteer editor programme Literotica run, they might not up to a be professional standard but they will make your writing easier read. I'm dyslexic and for this reason poor grammar and spelling are a deal breaker for me, I find it hard enough to read already