All Comments on 'The Covenant Ch. 02'

Rape is not what I wish to read about when I read Non-Human.

you've got a good start here.....i'll be checking regularly for the next chapters.........ignore the anon post before mine......don't know what he was thinkin when he typed it.........as an aside.......make the chapters longer......

hope the guys intended mate finds out. something like cheating should not be kept quite for any reason. he cant think to highly of her to cheat in the first place.

I'm not really into succubus stories but this one has grabbed my attention. I can't wait for the next installment!!!

And don't pay attention to the anon. He or she CLEARLY didn't read your tags before reading your story. Your story is about a succubus and werewolves so it BELONGS in the Nonhuman category.

this story is a bit interesting but I am a bit confused as to why she was tied up and what is really going on. certain things to me don't make sense. And I don't like that the sex was forced

I agreed with a previous comment this story should be listed under "non-consentuall" not werewolf. Rape is an act of violence. This should not be in the werewolf category.

More.

Your verbal flow & grammar are decent. The idea behind your story is being implemented in a unique and different way.

I'd like to read more of it. I'll be lurking (:

Please update!!

After Alexi bonded with the Succubi Princess that created such drama since now Princess has Alexi stuck in her head,and even tho she hates him with a passion and that being the optimum word,passion Princess is now and forever linked to the so-called Dog and she can't escape that unless she kills him,but since she is a prisoner she can't do shit.

I really wish the author would continue this so the Succubus and Dog can grow closer,also unsure but are Succubi capable of pregnancy,it would be fitting if Princess were to bare his offspring and create half werewolf half succubi/incubi children.But either way I just hope this goes on more.Great Read.