All Comments on 'The Creators Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Holy Shit

I cannot wait for the next chapter. The way you weaved this story is so brilliant, taking time to develop the characters on their own before having them meet. I love how they make descisions based on their personalities too. It feels like they are driving the plot, and not you. It's just awesome. This is the best series on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
This is not going to end well

I can just tell this will all end horribly. Who's going to die? I don't want any of them to die! Just stop the story right now and say they all lived happily ever after.

negrodamu5negrodamu5about 3 years ago

This story is fucking crazy.

I also found another error. It's on page four. "I'd met Lucilla's type before; privileged sluts who gaged their self-worth on how 'wild' they could be, always overcompensating and sexually one-upping." Gauged instead of gaged.

LooselyhumanLooselyhumanabout 2 years ago

This would be such a fun, great story if it wasn't for your absurd anal fixation. Why take it so far? Ruining bodies for life just is not sexy. 2/5 for this chapter.

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I write erotic novels because my imagination is vivid and fucked up, and if I keep those thoughts bouncing around in my head, I'll get brain cancer. So now, I'm putting them in your head. If you like debauched high fantasy, religion-gone-wrong, shameful incest or just boring o...

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