All Comments on 'The Crop (MFF)'

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curiouscarolecuriouscarolealmost 4 years ago
Nice theme

Loved it😎, but could have been paced a little slower.

BroadusBroadusalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Imaginative and well-written, leaves me hoping for further episodes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More...

Please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I'm not really into this scene but

This was one of the hottest one page stories I've ever read. The dialog was exceptional. Really nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent!

Good mix of reality with a hedonistic dollop of fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow. Vrry very hot

One of the best stories I have read. Very hot. Are you going to write more of this?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

I agree. Wonderful story and a second chapter would be very welcome

chytownchytownalmost 4 years ago
Nice Original Storyline****

Fun sexy and very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

oldtwitoldtwitalmost 4 years ago

Absolutely great story, I really thought it was so well written, good characters and a nice plot with some very well thought out sex.

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I dream and I write. Men and woman and their interplay fascinate me, especially as they get older. Old does not mean dead, and yet in the world of sex that seems the assumption. People are like wine, as they age they change, in a multitude of new and interesting ways.