All Comments on 'The Crystal Pt. 01: Teacher is a Pet'

Loved the story. Hope you add more chapters. It would be great to see her become their total submissive slut maybe. God luck.

Really good! i liked it!

Not bad, but the whole thing fell a bit flat. The super-hypnosis is always a tough sell because you've effectively eliminated any struggle or conflict. The protagonist goes into instant-robot mode where the bad guys can do anything and there are no ramifications.

Plus, would they really introduce her to all their friends? What's the upside to that? How do they know the trance will hold for hours at a time? Why would they want to share their pot of gold right out of the gate like that?

Loved it,

wish it would happen to me :)

misty part 5

Does the necklace work on men?> If so. I am sure they could convince her boyfriend that them using her is a great idea.

This is a good story that could be great, if there sex scenes were fleshed out a wee bit more.