All Comments on 'The Crystal Rainbow Ch. 21-25'

by Nyasia

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Anonymousabout 16 years ago

Translation-error??

The story is one of many that I follow on this site, and I like it very much.

However, you translate "Merde, ça c'est trop fort!" as "Shit, well I'll be damned!". I think that the correct translation should be "Shit, that it is too strong" or maybe "Shit, it is too strong".

It is a difference, but I am not sure if I am right in this, also because it can be important for the story itself.

lavar69 over 7 years ago

Great story

I love how you have a lid out the story line and character development. Great story keep writing

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Great story indeed.

I love the way you write, Nyasia.

It is very different from every story I've read here so far. I only wish I'd found it sooner.

Thank you.

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