by MVP6
Well, you definitely earned your ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating for this, and then some. This was one of your best stories yet. This built up gradually with equal parts tension, sexiness and fun and I loved every bit of it. Then came that sex swing and the whole pregnancy thing and I thought "OH NO" this just turned very ugly. And BAMB, you hit me right between the eyes with one of the biggest surprise endings ever and left me grinning ear to ear. Bravo!!!
You have provided an engaging story that allowed the reader to "feel" the pain of the BDSM scene as it unfolded. Loved the concept and the sweet ending that promises more to come.
On the one hand he saw stuff while wearing a mask. I guess even good authors make mistakes. But very thrilling. But hey, where can I get one of those things that stuffs your balls up your ass?