by mondotoken
That was some weird ret-con that you did there. Please don't leave us hanging another 5 months to see what you do next.
I'm grateful that Dexter has been saved from the last chapters nightmare. Now he can be taunted by his waking nightmares. Who knows what Agnes' little video will do to his psyche...
Personally if it were me I'd be tempted to post the video online. But then again, he did arguably have it coming for the crap he pulled, then again it wasn't him who made the first video and sent it to her. Arghh who's the good guy here?
Glad to see your return.
Please continue. I'm looking forward to see more.
What a fucking rebound!!! ... Fuck Agnes, the dude should focus on the Androstenone-X and fix this mess he created. Agnes is a lost cause
This is literally the first time I've ever posted a comment here I created an account just for this , but please, for the love of almighty God, keep going, this is literally the best series on literotica I've ever read, and in all honesty, I think reeeeeeeealy want him to get Agnes, its like like serious lol, I need more, soon.
Good chapter. Kind of an odd retcon, but it was enjoyable none-the-less. That said, you're probably going to get a low rating simply due to the cuckold themes without a cuckold tag.
Yeah I'm done reading this, fuck this. First Glenn gets ripped apart by walkers on The Walking Dead and now more bullshit happening to Dexter, being shitted on by asshole characters. Yeah I'm done, this is gonna be a fun week.
For the love of God, GET AN EDITOR. Using the spell check system on whatever word processing software you're using isn't enough. The story is fine, although I personally don't like the direction it's headed- these later chapters are very different from the first chapters. More incoherent screaming, and the poor conventions doesn't help in the slightest.
Seriously, editor! Good plot and writing but you're leaving out entire words every other paragraph