All Comments on 'The Cupid Effect'

Not bad, strange twist in later chapters. Story not complete, hasn't been updated since 2018

are they gonna get addicted or something or is it just a short time thing?

I feel bad for the night nurse

That kelseyhad it coming. Interesting how she handles it. Enjoyed it and going to read more.

The lack of basic punctuation and the liberally sprinkled unnecessary words made this a difficult story to read. Spend some more time editing.

Amazing story, I can't wait to read more

I hope this is only the beginning and we get a new chapter soon

Like your effort so far. I really like mind control stories. The only issue I have is his name. Really? I know he's a nerd but I wish you had chosen a different name.

With that said I am waiting for the next part.

After he goes through the cheerleaders and teaching them some manners.

Hope he gets his head out and gets with his BFF

Like the story. can't wait to see if Dexter gets all of his Tormentor's.

Thinking maybe Tiffany should be next have the teacher make her change partner's

see if Miss Kelsey Taylor likes that Dexter and her BFF are sitting close.