by FacetiousTales
One of the best series I have read in a long time - please keep churning them out!
Loved the ploy line and character development. I really hope you continue the story further. The sex scenes were also well written and very sexy. Thanks for the story!
It's a fun read but nothing about Ellie makes the slightest sense whatsoever. Nothing she has done up to this point supports her actions in this chapter.
Dazboot, I have to admit the reveal was poorly foreshadowed. The only thing was the fact that Ellie was always alien, and a perfect actress. And in the very last parts of the buildup it was clear she had some kind of a hidden agenda, and she didn't want Erica to tell anything about what she knew to the others.
But you're right, that just shows she was hiding something, not really hinting at the nature of that secret.
Very entertaining, and some good character building. A little heavy on the sex, but I really enjoyed how you built the story development into it so it wasn't just another boink scene.