All Comments on 'The Dame & The Dick'

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 5 years ago
Sophistication

A shot of vermouth (ugh!) on a cigarette-stinking sofa (double-ugh!)---now that is the height of noir sophistication. A bit short for my taste but snappy fun nonetheless, although the ending was a bit ambiguous. Can we hope for more?

hydrangealawrencehydrangealawrencealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Yup!

Thanks for the feedback, I'll add this to the serialization list!

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 5 years ago
Good Read

I like your style although it's a bit on the short side. Do you plan a follow up?

hydrangealawrencehydrangealawrencealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Yes!

Yes, I do serialization for select stories, and this one is in the queue!

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I'm taking a brief hiatus during the emergency to keep up with non-pornographic work obligations, but I promise to be back soon! Next up is the compilation "Stories To Bang By: Vols. 1-50" and "Stories To Bang By, Vol. 51: Probed," a collection of two short erotic science fict...