All Comments on 'The Dance'

Would love aonger part 2

Great little short!

SAGE

Really sweet story! We never know where we’ll find companionship or possibly love, but someone has to take that first step. Wonderfully told!

A sweet quickie! Bravo!

When you know, you know ❤️

Cute - you’ve inspired my to write one too…

Oh, yeah. This one went straight to the heart! Thanks!

I agree with everyone else... A fun little short and a pleasure to read!!

Short and sweet! Loved it!

I agree with all the below comments. Thanks for a cutie.

Loved the story, I/m just plain jealous!

Another goodie!

Hah - good fun story, but the cynic in me says he woke up in the morning and finds she'd left with his wallet :D

when you least expect it...................

That was a fun and good short story that I believe could be made into an excellent full length story. You have started the chemistry between them. It deserves more. 5*

Very nice. No changes needed.

Short, sweet, and direct -- Oh, if love were only that simple....