All Comments on 'The Dance of Love Divine'

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man_avec_planman_avec_planabout 20 years ago
Damn....

That was verrrryyy.... good. But really short so could you stertch it out a little...?Don't kill it so soon...takes the anticipation away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Excellent Keep it up

Excellent work. Do keep it up. Only do not cut short the esctacy, prolong it

aacoolaacoolabout 20 years ago
sex is divine

Great story - one doesn't need to know Indian customs to enjoy the story. Sex is universal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Start

Very fluid and appealing writing style. The build-up was flawless, though the ecstacy could have been longer.

aacoolaacoolabout 20 years ago
love the juxtaposition of two cultures

Great story - the juxtaposition of two cultures, and the sexual awakening of the housewife are a real turn-on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
grrrreat

great concept more such stories pl z seemed a real life exp?

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