by eastern_lotus
That was verrrryyy.... good. But really short so could you stertch it out a little...?Don't kill it so soon...takes the anticipation away.
Excellent work. Do keep it up. Only do not cut short the esctacy, prolong it
Great story - one doesn't need to know Indian customs to enjoy the story. Sex is universal.
Very fluid and appealing writing style. The build-up was flawless, though the ecstacy could have been longer.
Great story - the juxtaposition of two cultures, and the sexual awakening of the housewife are a real turn-on.