by Jake Marlow
THAT WAS SO HOT. WISH YOU WOULD DO A CHAPTER WHERE THE HUBBY HELPED HER WITH THE NEW TOY.
I'm still reading it, i'm sure it's going to be great, just one thing that bugged me: When it's a male, the term is masseur, not masseuse. Though realistically, people probably make that mistake all the time.
Trying to imagine what kind of woman would be a "hunky masseuse". Laughed at this ... I know it's just an ordinary mistake, but it's the kind that gives a hilarious and wrong mental picture, and really interrupts the flow of reading the story. Worth fixing!
Anyway, very hot story, 5 stars!
When I read that she missed “a hunky masseuse”, all I envisioned was one of those big, brick-shaped German or Russian prison guard movie clichés— “Ve haff vays of making you relax!”
I wasn’t sure why she’d miss it, though.