All Comments on 'The Dance Teacher'

by Jake Marlow

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The Fuck?

The Fuck? Literally

TUCSON REDTUCSON REDalmost 11 years ago
nice read

THAT WAS SO HOT. WISH YOU WOULD DO A CHAPTER WHERE THE HUBBY HELPED HER WITH THE NEW TOY.

darkhammerlovedarkhammerloveover 7 years ago
Nice story so far

I'm still reading it, i'm sure it's going to be great, just one thing that bugged me: When it's a male, the term is masseur, not masseuse. Though realistically, people probably make that mistake all the time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
"The only thing miss is a hunky masseuse"

Trying to imagine what kind of woman would be a "hunky masseuse". Laughed at this ... I know it's just an ordinary mistake, but it's the kind that gives a hilarious and wrong mental picture, and really interrupts the flow of reading the story. Worth fixing!

Anyway, very hot story, 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

When I read that she missed “a hunky masseuse”, all I envisioned was one of those big, brick-shaped German or Russian prison guard movie clichés— “Ve haff vays of making you relax!”

I wasn’t sure why she’d miss it, though.

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