by Quberotica
Mom's got some balls to be so condecending, when she herself, just pulled into the driveway, from a party she said she'd be home from, the night before. You can't tell me that the board game they were playing lasted all night... screw the boss much? Time for a divorce!
The idea of two in a costume is not original...there is another story on this site a few years old. But it was well done overall...a good effort and I look forward to reading other stories by you
Hey there. I just wanted to say nice job. While there were a fair amount of typos (next time, proofread it a few times more), the story definitely had a nice progression. I'm usually not a fan of stories that have chapters posted within one installment, but for the purposes of this submission, it worked well enough.<br><br>The action was nice, if not a bit on the brief side. In addition, the build-up for the sexual tension could've been fleshed out a bit more. The story definitely hit all the bases, but it didn't hit them for long enough to be memorable. Next time, I'd say take your time a bit more.<br><br>I liked the end, too. The daughter's motivation for wanting to pursue the relationship with her dad is laid out very well, and I'm interested to see how it develops. On a final note, the bear suit was extremely weird. Original, yes, but definitely weird. Either way, keep up the good work.
I enjoyed the story so much I called my daughter, who lives in the same town, and asked her to come over. When she got here, I showed her the story. I read it over her shoulder and got an erection again. She enjoyed the story as I had known she would. Even though my daughter is married, she sucked my cock until we were both very excited. I fucked her for about fifteen minutes and then shoved my cock as deep into her as I could get it and gave her seven good hard squirts of cum. It felt wonderful. Excellent father-daughter time. Thank you very much for the pleasure. We're both eagerly looking forward to your next story.
People with shitloads of money have parties all year long - haven't yo ever watched Jumanji? That Kat didn't fight him might be alcohol - more likley hidden dsire. Quite Good!!! Keep the follow on simple as well --works well.
Who cares what time of year the party was...geesh...
Very well written, with just the right amount of everything...
Look forward to your next submission(s)
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Tasty. Just the right amount of everything.
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Well done.
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