All Comments on 'The Dark Horde Pt. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This chapter was a much-needed celebration after the previous chapter. I’m glad Bear survived, although a little saddened that Bruno wasn’t the first (or sixth) Minotaur she had. (Somehow I doubt he’ll be disappointed—and maybe he’ll be a more skilled lover than his fellows were.)

Still growing! I wonder if she has some eventual height limit? “Indoors” is already going to be hard for her, and it’s just going to keep getting more and more difficult as she keeps growing.

I’m curious as to where this story goes next!

HalfAsleepHalfAsleepover 2 years agoAuthor

I actually was going to "save" Bruno as her first, but it made the rest of the chapter clunky!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is amazing. Please keep writing more. Can't wait to see how Val reunites with all her friends.

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Just writing for the fun of it. * the Dark Horde series is over. It was started on a whim, and it finally came to a close, though I might re-visit it. It seems that there is a lot of possibilities there, with a lot more adventures. But it was written without a structure, an...

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