All Comments on 'The Dark in Your Blue Eyes'

This complete and utter drivel.

It's very promising.

Brutal, realistic and very descriptive

Good start

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Well written and engaging. Thank you

5 stars

Please write more. This was amazing!!

This is a fantastic start to this story with plenty of description and development of the characters. Please keep writing and add many more chapters to this masterpiece.

I'm so excited to read more <3

More soon please :)

I finally found an author that writes to my satisfaction. c:

I can't wait to read the next chapters of what promises to a great story.

I love this! I can't wait for more!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter. More please

more more more more mooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!

Your stories are fabulous, especially this one, please continue

When is the next part coming out?!?! I can't wait to find out what happens next! And I love your writing style. I've read a lot of stories, but none of them compare to yours.

OMG! You HAVE to write more!!!! This is exactly like my dream of being a sex slave!

I have to agree with the others. Please continue! Absolutely love this story!!

Please update! It was well written and im so curious about what is going to happen next.

Please update this!!

Whenever? We're not Job you know!

Please continue!

I like where this is going and the dark mysterious thingie's real nice. But you could make it a bit more realistic? A raped woman wouldnt have erotic dreams right after being violated

You need to finish this....I hate when writers do this....

Really hope there's a continuation to this story...really like where this is headed...

I really hope this story continues! Its so good already!

This is my FAVORITE story to date on here!!! Please continue!!!

This is really good why not continue the story

It has a great start but it is a shame it was never finished.

wheres the next part?