All Comments on 'The Date'

Not bad but it really cuts off mid-sentence. At least finish the conversation.

In other words, I want more.

The closest thing to an actual story that you have written.

quick and simple with lots of not grossly graphic sex. nothing deep or out of the ordinary. keep it up.

Good BTB story

Rubbish no depth husband is weak wife is stupid. Husband should have stopped his sister in law right from the start. It seems like he wanted his wife to cheat

Pathetic

This didn't make sense at all. 1 star.

Pathetic main character, irrational reactions, poor development - stupid writing really.. Just trash.

this really needs more development and a better ending!

Boring

That's it???

Amazing that anyone could put this on their favorite list. Boring and ridiculous! Gave it a 2-cause it takes balls to submit so much BS. Simply awful !!

Bullshit

Could have been good but just a half baked tale.

No comment. 2*s only. Sorry!

Total rubbish, dislike it!

It's just a bad story and the author is a wimp.

No ending you left it off in the middle of climax part of the story

Divorce is a good outcome for this marriage. Each member of the family, especially the children, will benefit from the process.