All Comments on 'The Date'

This story is cheeseball central. Aside from him driving her 90 minutes away from her home for their first date (who does that?), why she didn't leave at the first m'lady is beyond me. Speaking as a woman, that is legit ground to immediately end a date. I couldn't even make it to the end of page one. Far too corny. Far too sappy. Far too cheesy. Sorry author! This is a miss.

Good first story!

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I think the sign of a good author is both criticism and praise from readers. So, it appears you are on the right path. For me, I liked the story very much. The analogy of her womanhood to a garden was well done. Keep up the great work.