All Comments on 'The Daughter in Law'

This was just plain sweet! Loved every minute.

Nice, well-written story, I like the slow build-up and detail, and it was very easy to visualise everything from your writing. Hoping we get a chapter 2 and deeper delves into their sexual pleasures together.

cute story. I gave it 4 stars 1 star was taken off for the ending it didn't do the rest of the story justice. Pappasleaze!

I agree the Landlord making her feel uncomfortable was wrong but the mother in law is not any better.

The mother in law takes advantage of her daughter in laws vulnerability and betrays her son.

What a wench.

Very well done as it was more about how these two ladies got to that situation rather than the nuts and bolts of sex and a cock that works on command. Writers would be better served with early feelings than do all man, they do not exist.

I love the story and the comcept

i just love incest type lesbian sex. yeah in law is not incest but it works for me.

"Writers would be better served with early feelings than do all man, they do not exist."

What?

A sequel would be good mother daughter-in-law and son or perhaps mother in law daughter and the gardener

Straight from kissing to 69? Too rushed. Great idea but perhaps slow down a bit?