All Comments on 'The Daughters are Alright'

Really great story!!!! 6 stars.

I have two daughters and no wife. Unfortunately that's where my similarity to Steven ends. Thanks for exciting fantasy.

Well, that was . . . different.

I’m assuming, from you verbal awkwardness, that English is not your first language.

Welcome to America!

In your “English as a Second Language”class, did your teacher skip the unit on the purpose of the paragraph as a as a tool of communication?

Seriously, if you’re from Latvia this was an amazing tale! Anyone born in the Northern USA, however, would be embarrassed by this semi-incoherent drivel. I’m sure Southerners, however, are amazed by your astute diction. They’re probably still trying to use AOL as a thesaurus.

@Rapierwit24601 English is my first language. But my prose can be awkward. It's not the first time someone thought I wasn't American because of my writing style.

I've been told my writing reads like an AI wrote it. Yet no one elaborates on why that is or how my prose reads so awkwardly. Because of that, I can't fix it, obviously.

Anyone who disliked the way this story reads and is reading this comment now is welcome to explain what specifically bothered them about the way The Daughters are Alright reads. Some examples would be helpful. Seriously, you would be doing me a favor. And I could actually fix what people tend to criticize about my writing.

I like your writing style but fortysomething man cumming six times in single evening? Sorry but no.