All Comments on 'The Dawn'

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Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 6 years ago
Wonderful!!!

Very well done. Descriptive and skillful.

Hope you do continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hottt!

Loved it!

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 6 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story. Hopefully there's a 2nd chapter being considered.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The only thing about the story that I didn't like was that there is no more. I would have loved to see this turned into a series.

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