All Comments on 'The Dawn Chronicles Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Pathetic.

I stopped reading while the football game was going on.

amorone almost 5 years ago

Right up my street

Thanks for the story, well written and very erotic.

TheKrrak almost 5 years ago

Enjoyable romp

Thanks for the first part in this tale, eagerly awaiting more chapters.

5/5

zaksjack almost 5 years ago

keep it up

best story

Shadowforce1 almost 5 years ago

Great Start

Great start to what could be a good series.

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Still up!!!

Fantastic story.....more chapters required!!!

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

WOW!

I wish I was one of that Cougar's targets. In any event, can't wait to hear about more of her "hunts".

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Phew it’s been some time

I’ve dabbled in reading this stuff and it has been quite some time since a story had me this hooked when I went to read onto the next chapter there was nothing this needs more dawn needs to make all these boys lust for her.

wendy553 11 months ago

I'd like to be Dawn !

I love younger guys for real. 😎😊

Anonymous3 months ago

I stopped at "The next day" after 27 mistakes, MANY of which affected the story making sense!!!

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Tall, brown hair and blue eyes, very toned body. About 170 lbs. Into busty women both older and younger than myself. Very into both chatting and RP (as long as you are articulate) To those asking if the Dawn series will continue the answer is yes, eventually. Real life keeps...

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