All Comments on 'The Dawn of Wynter'

I like the characters you've conjured up, and the unfolding plot is rich with possibilities. Can't wait to see how you develop the story further.

Looking forward to see where it goes!

This chapter had it all: vampires, witches, passion, sex, power, restraint, humor (the equipment malfunction was hilarious), intrigue... I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Yves

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Something tells me that this story will have several twists and I love twists. Great wording and I can definitely picture the who thing. Love the humor hehe.

I really liked it and I'm hard to please

to more. You have grab my attention w/this first chapter. A vampire girl w/a magical ring. A bad guy who may end up being a good guy but who's working for the worst bad guy there is. And what do they both want? The girl w/the magical ring. And oh yeah she has powers no one has ever seen.

I eagerly await chapter 2.

Action packed and funny also,great start.

truly love the suspense and questions you've created in chapter 1....looking forward to a flowing continuation....