All Comments on 'The Day I Became a Monster'

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Bad grammar! Refused to continue reading.

Good job on this story! I really enjoyed the character development and plot exposition. I agree that the grammar made it hard to read sometimes, but excluding that this is a really good start. I would love to hear more from these characters! Grammar can be difficult and confusing, but if you just work on putting more commas in and do nothing else it will help immensely. Hope to read the next chapter soon =)

Your grammar didn't bother me one bit. Not at all, that anons loss!

More please when you can 💖

You have a great knack for pacing and char development, and that matters more than grammar a lot of the time, believe me.

I guess my definition of a monster is different ??!?

Lame