All Comments on 'The Deal'

A 65 year old sex slave? No thanks.

Seriously...a senior citizen in 6 inch heels...oops grandma broke a hip lol

Needs it.

Get an editor. Then get a decent. Some old broad is going to agree to his nonsense? I see her apologizing and that's it. What's he going to do? Divorce her? They split their debts and their assets equally, so he pays her stuff off no matter. A slave? Don't make me laugh. This was just bad story telling.

Hated the story. I tried to give this one star, but 5 stars came up. Is the fix in?

I have seen a few 65 year-olds that DO look VERY NICE! When you are more than 5 years older than them - most of them look pretty damn good! God made woman to be pleasing to man & I, for one, think HE did a pretty damn good job!

A good tale has to take the outlandish, make you swallow it whole and beg for more. This was just outlandish as a premise and just heaped more outlandish on top. So terrible I did not read it all.

She sure groans a lot.

Not that good but funny as heck. Thanks for sharing

Couldn't get past the first few lines. There were a lot of errors, and I couldn't even tell who was saying what.

...needs a lot of editing. The writing errors are a distraction.