All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 14'

I enjoyed that, the next bits should be very interesting

that was very interesting i just hope that in doesnt become a threesome and also that max doesnt fuck his mum, blowjobs etc is fine thou. another five stars from me and great work litfan.

I'd actually forgotten this chapter. Enjoyed it as much as all the others though.

Pete.

Hey Turtle! Tingling, huh? Glad to hear it - next thing ya know you'll be glowing like the rest of them!

I certainly hope you find the next phase for the Hughes +1 as tingly.

Thanks as always for your great comments!

Hey again PrinceLuke - thanks for reading and responding. Thanks for the high vote and kind words - I truly appreciate them.

This is all about love and comfort zones and sex and all that goes into the tangled webs we call life.

I hope you continue to enjoy!

Hey Pete!

I'm sorry - I really have to remember to reference you at the end.

I'm finding all sorts of chapters that I had completely forgotten about - it's a lot of fun going back to all this.

I regularly go back and re-read all your stories and those by some others I like a lot but never mine so re-posting them has been a unique experience.

Thanks as always for you words both here and in your own work! Happy writing my friend.

Usually I do not read long chapter stories, because after the 3rd chapter the son fucks the mother, then they end up fucking the entire town.

I love how this story is progressing, although Sue's story line seems rushed. Also, why are there two characters named, Cindy? Confusing.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Love & tenderness for Matt , Cindy & Diana.

Great sex for Sue, Kim & her son

Excitement for us

The confidence of self and intimacy the characters express and demonstrate is remarkable. Only in fiction does such maturity and understanding exist. 5 star series.