All Comments on 'The Debt Ch. 02'

This was a great story. Both Ch 1 and 2 of The Debt.

It was extremely well-written, exciting, appealing to the 'dark side' - at least the one present in me - and flowed with plot, dialogues, colorful consistent characters.

I read a fair amount of porn (rather read and view the pics in my head) and my chief complaint about what I buy at the porn store is its poor quality of writing. My chief complait of the Erotica at Chapters is it isn't usually rough enough or perverse enough, for me.

There were a few typos - not many and not intrusive to the flow of the story - and I loved it.

Thank you so much for writing it.

The ending's ok... well i like happy endings i guess... some action after would have made it hot but great story.

loving your stories :) can you make one with me in it too. . lol

to be in that back room fucked by those men as the doctor looked on as if he could care less. I know how excited she must have been as I fantasize about something like that - to be safe and fucked by men doing all the slutty things that a horny slut wants to do. It could only have been made better by adding a few more men. I loved this story!!

That was hot. Still, I liked "The Good Student" better.

Good fun and well written. A few typos but who cares. I enjoyed the story.

Dhipa, Dhiva...isnt that an indian name?

I loved the story, the theme of how she remained proud even in her use and abuse and her self fulfillment of her darkest needs. I identify with her need of being used humiliated and pain to obtain full orgasm/fulfillment. I hope you add the next chapters, although she left the ghetto to go "home" her need for nasty abuse will never leave, her need to be used against her will will grow and grow and her needs to become nastier and far more obscene in order to be totally fulfilled.....and I am confident that the Dr will see to it that she is fully enjoyed and used. More please.

The ending was somewhat predictably. But the action leading up to it was incredibly hot.

Great story which has left me breathless. The very end could have been a bit more dramatic, otherwise excellent. THANK YOU.

Awesome story! Keep it up. Hope to read more of your writing.

Absolutely tremendous, brilliantly written. You have a real talent, do keep it up please