All Comments on 'The Debtor's Corral'

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GortmundyGortmundy11 months ago

Excellent story, thoroughly enjoyable.

JBorsonJBorson11 months ago

Very fun story! Lots of room to build the world as well. I wonder if this Corral has a 'high roller' room for people with *very* large debts? ;)

ibuguseribuguser11 months ago

Good work. And rather funny.

greens444greens44411 months ago

Nice story. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is so hot

202GE202GE5 months ago

Very creative and hot story. While it does seem like a one off tale, it seems there may be a little more to explore with this world/scenario. Thanks for sharing this with us. 5 stars

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...