All Comments on 'The Debut Continues Ch. 02'

by MayhemLass

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Hope you got it....

I hope that5 you are the type to show the true meaning of the true D/S relationship. Only thru a complete understanding ca you truley experience the unselfish love of this unique couple. Show this in the continuation/conclusion of your story.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
taking a peek...

of something current here and it was quite the chapter. it certainly had quite the element of unconditional sacrifice - hence as to the cross. nice piece and written well. this is not my forte, but thought i'd stop by.....don

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