All Comments on 'The Decision'

If the story has a stupid indecisive asshole of a husband and cheating cunt of a wife it has to be a "realistic" story.

Nice one. I usually don't like no ending but this one was done nicely. Thanks for sharing.

I thought it was a good tale , what more needed to be said? He made his choice known, the rest is clearly up to her. 5 STARS

somewhere east of Omaha

cliff hanger ending. good one. lol I'm left hanging to the decision .lol

Once again JPB proves that when the husband does nothing, the whore will continue to fuck him over. Also points for consistency, you kept the husband wimpy and pathetic all the way through the story except for the unnecessary bit where he confronts her lover. Why bother making him do that, when you were just going to keep him so pathetic?

Nice finish...for a part one. There needs to be a conclusion.

Without the out come this is a nothing story.

The best thing is the ending. It makes the readers free to chose what they want, which is the ending which makes the happy. Me, I sorta lean to her choosing the group and then his methodically hunting them down and maiming all the married peoples children, right in front of them! The piper must be paid.

wimp cockold this plain cockold bob.

Leaving a good story like this, is just plain lazy writing.

Passive cunt of a husband character. Same old, same old

Good read. In my mind she ready went to far. Even without the sex, her entire plan was a betrayal.

Alternate ending:

Josie drops out of the group and nothing more is said. They both save face, and reset the relationship back to before Josie started off the reservation.

Josie ether gives up her wonderlust, or formally talks about it. She has learned that going behind his back will be fatal, and neither want to break up.

And that is the key assumption to the story which explains the hesitancy in both characters which many readers see as whimping out.