All Comments on 'The Delivery'

Interesting story concept.

Please proof read. Many times, Any vs. AMY

and In out package should be In our package. Good start

we need a sequel.

i want to read her total submission, begging to orgasm, and him in total control incluing her requesting permission to attend nature's calls, or sleep in a bed. i love it when doms pleasure the sub but don't permit orgasm. just bring to the brink and stop.

I don't like latex, not even thinking of wearing it.