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by Bayleon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic writing

This was a well-written, enjoyable story. Great job!

BayleonBayleonover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks for Reading!

Thanks for reading! This is the second part of an ongoing story; the beginning is "A Silver Patch", which I recommend you read if you want to know how these two met!

-Bayleon/Dice,

shebaresshebaresover 5 years ago
Makes me want to study science

This was fucking hot. Not much for Sci-Fi but keep writing.

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