All Comments on 'The Demon'

Ummmmm yes. Yes yes yes. More please! 😘

At least while gruesome as a horror should be, it certainly also nails the erotic at the end. A nice flow from one to the other to make for an entirely interesting read. Thumbs up!

Needs better description of how the claws were placed and such. It became confusing to follow.

Absolutely lovely and yummy, this story got more than a few juices flowing!

oh jesus wow. it's always a thrill to read stories (especially of this nature ;]) to have some sort of creativity to it. i beg of you to make a sequel!

I really enjoyed this story very much-Nice job, I can't wait to see if you write a sequel

Has been mentioned on the New story Review Thread in teh Author's Hangout.