All Comments on 'The Demonstration'

This was the lamest story ever! What is the purpose of this stupid demonstration? And SHE is used with a verb (subject pronoun), not HER.

Great story! I hope Josh comes over and inserts popsicle sticks into her stinky butthole and dripping quim.

Lawsuits galore! She could never work as a nurse, teacher, and any employer could refuse to hire her. No school would do this.

What on earth is "Her hairless sex" and "Her fingers slipped out of her sex" all about! It sounds as though the author is the one who needs to go to the sex ed class.

Well this story needs chapter 2, 3, 4.

The friend needs to get involved.

In response to the few other comments, its a story, fantasy, time to get yourself off.... not reality.

I don't know why people bother leaving negative comments, and if someone doesn't know what "her sex" means, then they probably don't read very much.

This was a delicious fantasy. <3

This is a good start to a story. There are many possibilities leaving it where it is. Please write more of the story.