All Comments on 'The Descent'

But the grammar needs some work. Lots of misspelled words and missing capitals/punctuation or run-on sentences.

Fake ass domme! She (Sadie) could of at least had the decency to be a switch. If you continue with this story can you at least give her some "fire" once she comes to realize she's a switch or something. Please don't continue to let her get "punked" I'm holding out a little respect for her but if she crosses all the way over...sad:( Lol

The feelings are what make it work for me. The self image of the domme, the reaction to the young woman who refuses to accept the public face of power, but sees through to the innter submissive the secret even from herself. That is what I fear, a strong professional woman, I fear the ones who ignore the me that I worked so hard to build and see the me I strive so hard to hide.

This really turned me on

Those on top need to learn a bit about being on the bottom, makes them better.

The person down below complaining about grammar, spelling punctuation.... fix it like a good little sub for Sadie.

Dommes being taken down a few pegs and humiliated? Count me in. Love this. My favourite story out at the moment

You must be shitting me. That was PATHETIC.

This is right up there with youtube videos of random women defecating in grocery store aisles. True classy humor.

The switch!

I need a part 2 for this

Just found this due to the release of part 2. Great started and headed for part 2. Well enveloped start and fun characters. Cheers