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All Comments on 'The Descent Ch. 01'

by youngwolf94

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Proofread?

Either you or a proofreader you know needs to correct all the errors in this story.

Pineapple_PizzaPineapple_Pizzaalmost 4 years ago
Yagami Light, is that you?

Is this like a prequel to Death Note? xD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sequel!!

Please make a sequel, I love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another Part

Please tell me there will be a second part

Great Text, keep up the great work

Charlie98225Charlie9822511 months ago

Excellent! More please!

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