All Comments on 'The Descent Ch. 01 - Ground Feeling'

by MercyB

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Female ass worship is by far my favourite thing. Not many stories on this subject are good, you have started so well so please continue. Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story...hope it continues

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love where it’s heading so far

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is really good, I hope the second part is as good as this first one, and I hope its come out soon!

roberta22roberta229 months ago

Good story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

so long and never end speaking, just for an asslicking !

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Come on bro I’ve been waiting for 10 days know :(

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

wow, really good!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story, really looking forward to part 2...

Will527Will5277 months ago

As hot as this is, it must have been written by a female, not a male.

cennodepressocennodepresso7 months ago

Wow, I like your storys! Please, continue

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You have beautiful writing skills! There is a dreamy introspective gentilness to both characters in your storey. You have totally seduced me into your mind. please keep writing.

Alf2891Alf28915 months ago

I love this story

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Looking forward to chapter 2. Seriously dirty ass cleaning and shit eating please!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please Upload the second part. Is "Tom's Toil" is one of the part? Then there must

be some other chapters also.. Fantastic descriptions. Must continue...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I have been checking for part 2 every week for the past 5 months!! When will come out?! Looking forward for slow but not too slow build up!

someonesGoodBoysomeonesGoodBoy3 months ago

Wow!!! Really hot! Fantastic that it didn't go all the way to the 'dark' side but really toed the line instead. Looking forward two upcoming chapters. 5 stars! Thanks for sharing and good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Fantastic, looking forward to chapter 2.

fla_man_chefla_man_che19 days ago

can't wait for chapter 2

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I love putting my Femdom fantasies in writing, especially if it ends up teaching men their rightful place in life and women how to be their own (and other's) bosses.