All Comments on 'The Desert'

by ALR1

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swingset66swingset66over 14 years ago
Very well done.

You did a excellent job of putting the reader into the charitors mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AMAZING STORY

VERY TALENTED BEING YOU ARE!!!! IT ACTUALLY BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES, THINKING HOW MUCH I MISS MY MASTER WHEN HE IS AWAY. I PERSONALLY SEEN THIS STORY AS A METAPHORE OF MY LIFE. I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE FROM YOU. THANK YOU FOR SUCH A TOUCHING STORY..

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