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All Comments on 'The Desk'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
THe Desk

Short fantasy. Is this a romance?

A bit too jumpy. needs some better transitions.

Cute start for a hot passionate story with a long ways to go.

LadyVerLadyVerover 8 years ago
Great story

Would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
GREAT START

Well done! Keep the momentum going and submit more of your efforts for our enjoyment.

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