All Comments on 'The Devil in Her Eyes Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Color me intrigued

I DEFINITELY need to see where this is gonna go. Great start to everything, solid hook. I hope the rest of the ride is as enjoyable as this was

YassreadYassreadover 3 years ago

great start , waiting for more.

RomanceLivesRomanceLivesover 3 years ago

What a fantastic beginning! Hooked me right from the very start. I'm intrigued with where this is going --- even though it was obvious immediately that she was the devil (okay, the title was a giveaway), there's more of a guardian angel vibe.

Fascinating story, and the writing is excellent.

JacktacularJacktacularalmost 2 years ago

Wow definitely a mind fuck, finding out the devil has a crush on ya! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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