All Comments on 'The Devil in Her Eyes Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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really fun so far....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I’m very curious to see where this goes. Fascinating (and titillating!) first couple of chapters to a story. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Hope to be able to read lots more very soon.

SorchakSorchakover 3 years ago
Good couple of beginning chapters.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read what comes next.

Lilith53Lilith53over 3 years ago
Damn good

I have to go read chapter 1 now. Waiting for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damnnnn

This is a great story, I better see part 3 tomorrow lol

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Looking forward to next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start.

You write well clearly and sucinctly

I suggest you keep the chapters coming

Lots of options already hinted at by Lucy

dgfergiedgfergieover 2 years ago

so far so good, a romance with the devil or one of his advocates. Brings to mind Mark Twain and fun book he wrote "Letters From The Earth". 5 stars

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