All Comments on 'The Devil in Jemma Dean'

That was an awesome read! Thank you!

Ok read but both guys are idiots. Was Starr an amazon sized female? How in the heck was she able to over power Donald and scare him? I guess booze and lust made him weak. Bobby is just an idiot to not notice something wasn't quite right with the way she is dressed and there had to be the smell of sex in the air. I would venture to say that being a cheat is going to be a regular thing for Starr.

The story started out fine but then it began to drop with the character description and nothing could save it from then on. None of the characters are believable. Starr is just a drunken bitch looking to get some dick even though she "loves" her man. Why the hell would she bring her one night stand back to her house? Why would she marry her boyfriend if can't satisfy her? Why is she bullying the guy she wants to fuck just because he was going outside? Why can't he over power her? Is she a giant or something? The plot is fine; girl gets a one night stand after her boyfriend neglects her. The characters, however, are terrible. 1 star.

You couldn't have described Starr any more repulsive than you did. Good job, you almost made me vomit.