All Comments on 'BtW Book 01, Part 02: The Devil of the Details'

Multiparty stories with different titles are the devil to keep track of. Easy for you, your only tracking one thread, we are tracking many threads so Nice story 1,2,3... is easier than Nice story, Not so nice tale, appalling Saga, Doggerals in the details... we tend to miss episodes then get angry with you and give up.

If you want to be an author and build a following, then not only do you have to tell a good story, but you also have to be administratively correct. List your stories as "Example, pt 1", "Example, pt 2; etc. Start each story, with the words, "Continued from Example pt 1, and so on. At the end of the chapter, use "to be continued" or, when finished, "The End." Make it EASY to read your stories and make your readers believe in you as an author.

This has been interesting so far, enough so that I'm looking forward to upcoming parts. Keep at it!