All Comments on 'The Devil Within'

My interests are definitely stirred. Hopefully you will continue this!

What an excellent beginning. I’m having a tough time resolving how she was possessed by stroking the image of Jesus, but I’m also of the opinion that a reader isn’t entitled to every single little thing being explained. If that’s the concept you want to go with, I’ll figure out a way to suspend disbelief. —-

My particular fetish involves men who are reluctant to have sex for whatever reason but then are reduced to rutting animals simply because of the sexual nature of their partner. Write the stories that appeal to you. You’re not getting paid after all! But if you did happen to incorporate that theme with one of the men in your story, I would be most appreciative. —-

Strong opening. I like the main character and want to read more about her. Thank you for your contribution. I hope you keep it up! - S

Looking forward to the TBC

No bad for a 1st chapter.